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A Thousand Shades of Grey

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If you take a twisted plate of glass,
And hold it up to the world,
You see the smog and the burning light
Twist and then
It’s beautiful

In some strange way
The furnaces become golden stars
And the clouds of ash are like the exhalations of a giant
Blink
Dead leaves look like lace through tears
And the only way to get rainbows in puddles
Is if they’re full of oil

And the lakes are rainbow hued
With fish scales and chemicals

There is something empowering
About the sting of acid rain

Sunsets look more colourful
Through air-borne dust

If you sit on the ash-dusted grass
In a park without flowers,
And listen to the noise around you
Make its own silence
And find the second darkness
Woven in the cage of beams
Then the
    Thousand
               Shades
                      Of
                         Grey


Settle around you like mottled robes,
Like watered silk

Wear the Foundry Crown,
The wrought iron wreath
And the yellow diamond
Ember jewels with pride


Because you have given the world
Hidden Beauty
This has nothing to do with 50 Shades, so sorry if you were looking for bondage. For Wielders-of-the-Pen's prompt, Pollution. I hate the litter and the pollution, but sometimes if you look at it out of the corner of a narrowed eye and take some drugs, it can occasionally look quite pretty. Kind of.
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Creativity: 9+ most reasons are stated below
Originality: 9+ Never even dreamed someone would try to make light of pollution, good job with keeping things original
Message: 10+ 'Even the destruction and filth can be beautiful if you look at it the right way.
Interest: 9+ A poem everyone should read!
Choice of Words: 9+ strong word choices/uses, really brought everything together and brought light to this dreadful topic
Use of Punctuation: 9+ poem flowed from line to line, not much punctuation but ending of lines were strategically placed
Education: 8+ impacts of human nature.
Entertainment: 8+ gorgeously written and phrased, nice meaning.
Readability: 10+ The poem was visionally appealing and the format was lovely. The way you set up the Thousand Shades Of Grey was pretty
Etc.: 7+ word choice

Total: 87+